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The introduction to this article is not done yet. You can help by adding to it. The following sentences need additional work:

The article discusses the history of the camera, from its invention in 1727 by Thomas Wedgwood, who called it the "fancy", up until today. It also takes a look at how cameras have evolved over time and what different types of cameras exist now.

This topic sentence does not provide a clear overview of the article's content and should be rewritten or removed as it is not helpful in setting up what readers can expect from reading on with this blog post.

This sentence is not in chronological order and should be moved to another place to fix this.

A list of "curiosities from photography" should be presented here, providing information that the general reader does not know or that the audience today does not have access to. This is a good place for things like why cameras have lenses since early cameras only had one piece of glass for taking photographs, or how film works.

You may also want to include an example for each of these topics so that readers can see what you're getting at with your writing (if you choose to use them).

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This sentence should be moved to the end of the first paragraph as it is an introduction rather than a theme of the blog post. Please read through and see if you can make this change.

This statement is redundant, so please rewrite it to avoid redundancy. The first part already makes a generalisation about photography, although some may disagree that early cameras were simple "fancy" cameras.

The first paragraph contains more information than necessary and needs to be reworked into smaller chunks.

You might find it a good idea to add some examples to highlight your points. Some of the points you have made do sound reasonable and sound like they are backed up by information in this article as well, but maybe not all of them. If you want to add more information here then you can use quotation marks around the sentence, or only include relevant parts.

This paragraph contains more information than necessary and needs to be reworked into smaller chunks.

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You might find it a good idea to add some examples to highlight your points. Some of the points you have made do sound reasonable and sound like they are backed up by information in this article as well, but maybe not all of them. If you want to add more information here then you can use quotation marks around the sentence, or only include relevant parts.

This paragraph contains too much information, in my opinion. It could be split into smaller paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to follow. The main idea of this article would be about the history of photography from Wedgwood's "fancy" camera to today and if this idea is satisfactory then maybe you should keep only the relevant information without including all of it.

This Wikipedia page is okay as a source but this article seems like a better one. Try reading both and compare them so that you can decide which one is better for your needs in the future.